Sherman's Legacy by @Tekn0mancer
Quick Mission Briefing..
The most important initial thing about a foundry mission is Location, location, location. Where does it start? I am very happy to say. This mission is very clearly identified. So off the bat, I was happy.
As far as general play, I did enjoy the plot, and the dialogue options, The fact that some of the combat was optional was a good feature.. I will have to play it a few times for any actual editing suggestions, but I liked it.
From a writer/plot perspective, I would suggest that you inform the player to start in a "neutral" ship, if possible. but that is a super minor suggestion.
I will play the other two missions this weekend also, and I would suggest to others to play, as well.
The most important initial thing about a foundry mission is Location, location, location. Where does it start? I am very happy to say. This mission is very clearly identified. So off the bat, I was happy.
As far as general play, I did enjoy the plot, and the dialogue options, The fact that some of the combat was optional was a good feature.. I will have to play it a few times for any actual editing suggestions, but I liked it.
From a writer/plot perspective, I would suggest that you inform the player to start in a "neutral" ship, if possible. but that is a super minor suggestion.
I will play the other two missions this weekend also, and I would suggest to others to play, as well.