Finally had the chance to sit down and play this, and I absolutely loved it!
As I said in my review in-game, the maps and the puzzles in particular are stand-outs. And even though I used a similar "zoning witout zoning" trick in my mission, I was still left in awe and wondering how you did the transition of leaving the compound and running outside to the shuttle. Amazing.
All in all, it's obvious that you must have spent a lot of time on this, and it's paid off.
Very well done!
I suggest you advertise on StarbaseUGC, Foundrymissions.com and the STO forums if you haven't already.
And if you do get negative comments about the same-sex relationship, you MUST ignore them. Don't EVER take this mission down. I wish we'd had an episode of one of the TV series that had this storyline, and I live in hope that Cryptic will produce an official mission that features a same-sex partnership so prominently as your mission does.
Well done again.